vox nihili

I'm sorry about your grandmother, assuming this is nonfiction. Poetry does make a good outlet of expression. Now for the criticisms... I may sound bossy and/or critical, but it's just ...

I don't want to be harsh...but I just didn't get it. Tip for helping people understand it: tone down some of the language. As professional and serious as it sounds, ...

a critique: the girl who is talking about over fishing... overfishing is one word. About Barry... I'm not a psychologist, but I read a lot about medical anomalies. And about ...

It reminds me of Emily Dickenson's "I never saw a moore, never saw the sea, but know I how the heather looks and what a wave must be...etc" Did that ...

Okay. Brace for impact- I'm about to give a mini-lecture on OCD. First off: do you really experience any such urges in your own reality? If you do, I'm sorry ...

One suggestion: more variation of the wording. It's a sweet rhyme, but as Juniper pointed out, it's also quite short. And love poems are of course, ubiquitous. Maybe a fresh ...

I've got one question: what happened? Sorry, I'm just in suspense mode. I'm itching for an elaboration! A longer poem that's a little more specific? You've got me hooked. The ...

I love the sometimes gentle, sometimes intense wording in this piece. But I really don't get what's going on here. Maybe that's just me. ;) Probably is just me.... It's ...

Okay, here comes the army of red pens. Sorry, I just had to say that. ;) Don't take the crit hard, please, it's just what we do here. I'm going ...

HI again. This is a poem I did this year. And as I always say,read, comment, check, review, correct if necessary. I'd really like some help with this poem. (It's ...

Amazing! I read this way too quickly to look for anything that could be misplaced in here. I didn't see anything, anyways. Well done. You did a good job at ...

Here's my critique. I leave a number in the area I want to make a comment on, scroll down and see the comment, make sense? Okay, here I go. I ...

Everyone else has really picked this apart already in terms of grammar, punctuation, how the words sound I'll stick to the other issues. Such as exactly what your poem is ...

You really make a good point. We all have one life and we have to choose what we do to ourselves and with ourselves on this journey. I think there ...

Wow. This is good. I read part of her diary once, I didn't get even halfway through, then the book was overdue and it had to be returned... Unless I'm ...